Alit Desi Rahmah(A320090060)
MY CAT
Several months ago, what I saw made me happy. I found a kitten laying under the tree nearby my house. I felt compassion of it. It was very emaciated, dirty but cute and fluffy. I was sure that it was left by its mother. How poor it was. Then I took it home and promised to take care of it. Arrived at home I cleaned it up. When I wiped its face and body, I realized that its eyes was not open yet and its placenta was not unattached too. I gave it everything it needed. I gave it milk to keep it alive. Although I met it just a few minutes, I was afraid to lost it. I built a comfortable nest for it. That nest where I laid it on was so simple. I made it from cardboard with a towel as its bottom layer. That I was so glad to having it was true. I felt that I found a new friend. But only three days I kept it, I lost it. It passed away and left me alone. It was so fast for me. How it could happen made me so sad.

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Dear Alit,
Your composition is good enough. Go ahead with your writing creativity. Please train again to make another composition containing more noun clauses. The more training you do, the better will be.
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